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Rocot the Saiyan

Post  SuperSaiyan12 on Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:03 pm

Rocot looked out at the sky for what seemed like the thousandth time today.He trained hard since he was a little kid. Hoping to become the greatest fighter in the universe. Leaving his thoughts Rocot yelled, "I've got to train harder!" "There is greater power than mine out there."
Rocot flew as fast as he could depleating his energy supply fast. He soon landed fast."I've got to train harder," said Rocot. He started punching the air. He went all out until he was on the ground sweating under the sun. Rocot hated living alone. He tried to find friends, but the saiyans were wanted nothing to do with him. "Why is life difficult," he wondered aloud. He tried to be friends with some fellow saiyans but most were stronger than him and wanted nothing to do to him. He was what people called a low-class saiyan. Because of this is why he vowed to train harder. He jumped up with amazing speed and became to power up. He soon got tired and flew to his small house."Being a low-classed saiyan is hard," he said to himself.

Zeni:150
PL:40
HP:100
STR:15
END:10
SPR:5
AGI:10


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Re: Rocot the Saiyan

Post  Korn✔ on Tue Jul 13, 2010 9:35 am

(( Good but still can be better. Try make it longer and show us more of the character. Plus are you sure you want to be Vince? not really a Saiyan name lol, try reading this guide))
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Done

Post  SuperSaiyan12 on Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:47 pm

((Hows this for you
p.s his name comes from carrot dropping the r
and adding an O for an A))
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Re: Rocot the Saiyan

Post  Korn✔ on Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:52 am

Approved!
((I expect your next roleplays to be longer Razz))
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