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Vegeto fights himself

Post  Vegeto on Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:30 pm

Vegeto was flying when suddenly a portal open then a kid popped out. He looked exactly like Vegeto. Vegeto asked what was his name. He responded his name was Vegeto then attacked Vegeto. Vegeto dodged it and said that was impossible. The kid said shut the hell up. Vegeto powered up. His aura now blazing out Vegeto sprinted toward him and punched and kicked him. The guy dodged the punch but was hit by the kick. The guy then charged Vegeto the started beating Vegeto to a pulp. Vegeto managed to grab a kick and then flunged his look alike away. Vegeto then fired a masenko then charged at the guy. The guy was hit by the masenko and then fell Vegeto grabbed him and slammed him down. Vegeto then powered up a masenko but the guy fired a masenko as well. The two clashed but the doubleganger won. Vegeto then realized something the look alike didn't have his sword. Vegeto then powered up to max took out his sword then charged at him. Vegeto then attempted to slice him. The doubleganger managed to avoid many slices. Vegeto then put the sword away and attempted to just do hand to hand combat for now.

After many hours of fighting it got dark. Vegeto then powered up but tried to hide his red streak so he could blend in with his surrounding. Vegeto then started blending in he then attacked his opponent from behind. What's the matter having trouble seeing Vegeto said. The doubleganger then sensed Vegeto's power level and attacked him. Vegeto was getting hit and fast. But then his doubleganger made a mistake he powered up and Vegeto could see him wherever he went. Vegeto then kicked him in the stomach then took out his sword and sliced him to bits. Vegeto then fired a masenko. Nothing was left of the doublegamger. Vegeto then went home to eat.
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Post  Ldog2010 on Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:17 am

((post your starting stats if you don't know what I mean click portal at the top and then the rules and getting started. Also I just wanna make sure you know that all races start on their respective planets. Also you start out with NO techniques you have to learn everything.

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Post  Korn✔ on Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:45 am

((How about looking at the other roleplaying threads around here?
Instead of making it into a stew like this: "then a kid popped out and attacked vegeto then vegeto dodged and said it's impossible and so on.."
do something like this:
"In a matter of seconds a kid popped out of thin air. He instantley started to lunch punches and kicks at Vegeto.
-"It's impossible!!", Vegeto replied while dodging the attacks."

As you can see I used more words to describe what is happening, I also used -".." like he actually said it and not like im just telling the story to a freind.

Plus think of how it will look in real life. For example a portal opens and a kid pops out of it looking exactly like you would you just ask him who is he? Ofcourse not you'll be like WTF who is this punk? You'll have to describe your character's emotions, he is not a robot that just reacts to everything that is infront of him regardless of the situation.))
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