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Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  MeredithPunk on Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:53 am

(((Hey guys, this is my introduction to my character, hope you like it, I will post more maybe tomorrow or the next day, hope you like my works.))

Nakato strolled along the barren land of Vegeta. His white boots clicked along the earth. Hands by his sides, where was he on his way to? His home, he lived with his parent, his mother was away most of the time, one of the top nurses on Vegeta, and she was mainly at the Vegeta Airport, tending to any battle worn spaceships or anyone injured due to the rough journey. His father on the other hand, well his father spent most of his time outside in the open, training his skills to perfection. Nakato’s dad you see, is a relative of King Vegeta, the ruler of planet Vegeta. So he thinks it’s a bit of a duty to work his way into the royal family. Nakato on the other hand, mainly focuses on learning Prince Vegeta’s moves. He’s been studying tapes of all Vegeta’s battles and tournaments. Studying his moves,
He moved along the ground, his scarlet robe, draped over his shoulders. His loose white shirt flapped freely in the wind. He ran his fingers through his black serrated hair. He kicked up some slight dust and it blew away not noticed by Nakato. He approached his house now, seeing his brother running around in the backyard. It was kind of humourous to Nakato that his brother was so carefree now, but soon, once he had grown up, he’d be studying the royal family’s tactics.
He came to the gate lifting the lock, before entering the yard. “Hey Nakato!” his brother called racing along the grass, meeting him at the grass. His brother jumped at arms out at Nakato. Nakato acted fast gripped on to his brother’s arms and finally sending him back down to the ground, “Hey Takumori!” Nakato said, his brother’s enthusiasm always amazed Nakato. Nakato was mainly the mature one in the family, besides his mother who was always away, his dad was all in that family honour and didn’t like the ways of what he called “Young punks” his brother was only 4 still young and immature. And well, Nakato although he was only 15, he was very mature.
He moved over their grassy yard, that’s the odd things about Nakato’s families house, it was in the middle of the barren plains of Vegeta, except it had exceptional grass. Nakato, moved to the door of his house and gripped down on the knob, he noticed his distorted reflection on the shiny gold brass. He twisted it and pushed the door open. He entered their small kitchen. Seeing his dreaded study books lying on the table, “Oh no, father left my books here, no doubt this means he wants me to study,” Nakato picked up his study books and went up to his room to study
An hour passed, Nakato was just coming down the stairs when he heard a knock at the door, he checked where Takumori was, turned out he was just watching TV, Nakato assumed dad would be home soon. Nakato ran to the door, placing his robe over his shoulders strapping it up tight, he opened the door, it was six o clock, it was sparring time Nakato and his friend Bandit usually go out for training at six, not to Nakato’s surprise it was Nakato at the door. “Hey, Bandit, here for sparring?” Nakato asked, “Yeah, you’ve just finished studying assume?” Bandit said chuckling slightly, “Yeah, just coming down the stairs,” Nakato chortled.
The two boys made their way out to the flat plains. “I’ve been working on this new technique,” Nakato mentioned to Bandit as they took their positions, “It’s called the Gallick Gun!” Nakato made a motion with his hands, showing how the move was done. “Nice, we’ll see if it’s any useful ‘eh” Bandit said crouching slightly, taking a solid stance, “Now, go!” Bandit shouted, this was usually for Bandit, to get a slight head start, but Nakato had adapted, he laughed a little as Bandit came charging it, speeding through the air.
Bandit flew through the air, with his hands by his sides, Bandit mainly fought with his legs, and he did this time as well. Bandit landed right by Nakato’s ear, Bandit sent a sharp left foot to the back of Nakato’s head, Nakato pivoted on his left foot, receiving the kick and gripping down to Bandit’s leg. Bandit took this as a good opportunity to go for a punch, so he sent out a fast right hook, but Nakato was ready, he stopped the incoming fist with his other hand. Nakato who was holding Bandit’s limbs, pushed off from him, sending his stumbling back, Nakato lined his finger up with Bandit. Bandit still stumbled backwards; Nakato formed a well shaped ki orb and blasted it off hitting Bandit square on the chest. Bandit fell back landing on his back, Nakato ran in legs ready to claim Bandit’s chest, but Bandit used instant transmission and teleported behind Nakato, “So glad I learnt that when I was young!” Bandit laughed, Nakato turned quickly landing his right foot into the side of Bandit, Bandit curved over, spit flying out of his mouth, he gaped at the impact Nakato landed on him. Nakato chuckled, flinging him off his foot.
Bandit held his side, gripping just below his ribs. Nakato looked; it seemed he laid a harder kick than thought. Nakato stopped letting Bandit catch his breath. Bandit then stopped too, gave a sly smile and came running along the earth to Nakato, “Dirty tricks!” Nakato exclaimed. Bandit had his right arm ready to swing. But instead upon reaching Nakato, leaped high and gave his a nice right leg to the jaw. Nakato was flung back. This was actually painful; Nakato didn’t play tricks like his friend Bandit. Bandit approached Nakato, flat on his back gripping his jaw, his pain began to ease, it was time to try the Gallick gun, except Nakato needed room, Ne kicked his legs up, landing straight into Bandit’s abs, shooting back across the plains, this came as quite a shock to Bandit.
Without delay Nakato rose to his feet, standing in a strong stance, he pulled his hands out in front of him. He gathered all his ki. Gathering it in his fingers, the main component of the Gallick gun, he tensed them focusing on the main ki areas, he had seen a chart of this in his studies where the most powerful ki in his body is, he needed both a mixture of mental ki, found in his mind, and strength ki, found in his arms. He gathered both in his fingers, because this was mainly an aggressive attack, it was more strength ki than mind. Nakato charged, refuelling his body, preparing for the attack. His aura came into clear sight now; it was bright red, sparkling amongst the barren plains. “Haaaah!” he called, releasing all his power from inside, he was prepared now, he drew his hands back, tensing them, focusing on all the ki.
Bandit was just getting up, he drew to his feet still quite wary. “What?!” he called; his eyes widened and realized what was happening. His mind raced, he tried to remember the receiving stance, a good solid stance for receiving powerful blasts. He spread his feet, holding his arms out; facing his palms outwards, His head facing directly to the opponent. He focused all his ki to his knees and elbows. The main receiving joints, he held still charging for the blast, “Yaarrgh!” he called, his voice was now in competition with Nakato’s his was louder..
Nakato took his hands back, they were ready, purple light formed around his fingers, then pink wrapped around his arms. It charged well, sending a shiver up Nakato’s spine, this was actually it. He felt the energy rising, He remembered reading that he shouldn’t try to raise it too high, he should keep it at a level on energy he know he can control. He gathered it well, he formed the orb, the beam was ready, he glanced up to Bandit, he had a determined look on his face, and Bandit now looked very serious he had never seen so much concentration, was this attack enough to win
He shot his hands out, the energy pulsed, he couldn’t help smiling, it felt great, the powerful shock pulsing through his arms, beaming out, flying at the speed of well, he didn’t know, but it was fast. He shot through the air, the whole of the plains was lit up. Purple and pink combined and struck Bandit. Bandit’s face was red, veins were popping up all over him. The beam faded, the light was gone, and Nakato still felt the adrenaline of it. The bad thing was Bandit was still standing...
Bandit fell flat on his face, his body, was covered in scratches; his knees were shaking, his arms jittering. He seemed to be mumbling some crazy gibberish. Nakato was overwhelmed, the attack had worked, except he was so drained, he dropped to his knees. He needed to learn to be able to retain some energy so he had enough to stand next time. He had done it, but there was so much more room for improvement...

((Thanks Aurzel!))

Pl:40
Str:10
Agi:10
End:10
Spr:10


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Re: Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  Aurzel on Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:17 am

((you get 40 points to distrubte from the start, and when you make a post dedicated to training you can have the boost listed under that training, plus 1 point per extra word over 400. so for now just put how your starting 40 stats are distributed under your post))

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Re: Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  ssj3 on Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:33 pm

((Impressive roleplay!

I'm really looking forward to fight you and train with you someday. Razz))
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Re: Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  Aurzel on Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:06 am

((I'm amazed at not only your roleplaying but your english too, hope you stick around))

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Re: Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  MeredithPunk on Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:10 am

Thankyou both very much for your very kind comments,

((I'm amazed at not only your roleplaying but your english too, hope you stick around))

((Impressive roleplay!

I'm really looking forward to fight you and train with you someday. ))
Yes maybe a spar sometime, still needing this approved tho? :S

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Re: Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  Ldog2010 on Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:33 am

Approved just make sure you keep tally of all your post

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Re: Nakato, Saiyan Warrior ( Approved)

Post  Korn✔ on Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:46 am

Approved!
((Overlooked this because it was locked by Ldog, the stats are updated now))
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