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The New Unknown Sayin

Post  goku jr. on Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:55 pm

Part 2.
After hours of talking everyone learned why he cane in serch of his father.He wanted to learn all that his father did.More hours past and goku jr.learned what he had to do. Dissapointed,he walked out to find vegeta.He then blasted Goku jr. with his final flash.He died instantly.As this would be sudden to someone Goku jr. was glad vegeta killed him.As he walked he spoke to king yemma and he allowed goku jr. to go train with king kai but he had to run snake way.While running on snake way he looked down and saw a backpack.It contained 1 senzu bean a book of villans power levels and a hat.he kept the items and started on agein.After 4 hours of walking he finally made it to king kai's planet.He talked to king kai and began training with bubbles.He train with bubbles for 2 days and bubbles taught him how to do an kamehameha.

To be continued in part three.
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Post  MeredithPunk on Thu Jul 22, 2010 3:45 pm

Ok, this doesn't even hit the 300 word minimum mark, and is too rushed, space and describe things a little more next time. Try to lenghten your posts. Plus you cannot rp, until your first post has been approved.
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Post  Korn✔ on Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:21 am

MeredithPunk wrote:Ok, this doesn't even hit the 300 word minimum mark, and is too rushed, space and describe things a little more next time. Try to lenghten your posts. Plus you cannot rp, until your first post has been approved.
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